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because the stars are still shining
and the earth's still turning
- girl, don't you give up yet
the world is yours for the taking.
©2009 ~Admantina
:iconadmantina:

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exam studying makes my brain wander off. random phrases. hm.
it's more like me being too lazy to put up actual writing.
comment comment?
i swear this doesn't mean anything.
but reading it now i kind of want to dedicate it to some of my friends. i think you guys know who you are. :heart:

it's kind of funny how my comment is about 5x longer than the poem itself.

anyways, i think i actually want to make something out of this eventually. for now.. (:

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:iconfictionalxsuicide:
this reminds me of a song...the middle by jimmy eat world.
i like it, hope you expand on it eventually.
:iconadmantina:
I just searched the song up on youtube XD I've heard it before, but never occurred to me for this poem. When I writing it I was thinking that it sounds like a song though =P
lalala =)

-continuing the creek conversation-

do you know how far the path goes?

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cartwheeling into infinity.
:iconaznchopsticks:
i love this. <3 ;D
good job!
:+fav:
:iconaznboardergirl:
LOL the creek conversation xD

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Optimism can take you anywhere.
:iconadmantina:
aww thank you! :glomp:

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cartwheeling into infinity.
:iconadmantina:
XD YES. CREEEEKK

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cartwheeling into infinity.
:iconfictionalxsuicide:
that depends...which way?

i think that it goes just past the lays factory one way, but i dont know about the other.
:iconaznchopsticks:
haha. you're welcome ^^ :glomp:
:iconwhoapony:
This one's a little more obviously optimistic ;)

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