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He kisses her until crimson roses bloom on her lips and spill down her alabaster skin
like sinful pomegranates from Persephone's own mouth.
He crushes her against him, holds her tight-tight-tight in his arms
and tattoos black and blue flowers across her back

No one will hurt you while I'm around.

He whispers the promise with scarlet lips and a silver tongue
and stains her ears a poisonous black
Her hair sticks to his lips-tongue-mouth
while his vows engrave themselves upon her heart

No one will hurt you...

He watches her eyelids slip, gracefully, blissfully
With his promises lingering, sparkling, upon each 'lash
And only then does he finish his vow

...but me.
The full name was meant to be:
Of Blue Flowers and Sparkling Vows

Anyways, I'm actually pretty happy with the imagery in this one. There's not much of a point to it, but it was randomly inspired at around 1 am in the morning.

Please leave a comment! :heart:

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:iconmiss-sunshine-fairy:
Miss-sunshine-fairy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
That is reallly good! The imagery was awesome i could see the whole thing in my head. and i like the way you described his vow!
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Goodbutbad Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly love it. It kinda makes me imagin alot of things
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:iconadmantina:
Admantina Featured By Owner May 14, 2009
Thank you! :heart:
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Goodbutbad Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime ^^
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Very well written.
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:iconadmantina:
Admantina Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
Thank you! :heart:
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nooj-deathseeker Featured By Owner May 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome
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Nastaciakaye Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I cannot decide if the guy is pyschotic or sweet. Cannot decide if the girl knows or not...

this piece was well written and leaves the reader thinking...
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:iconadmantina:
Admantina Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
thanks :) I wanted to leave it open-ended..
but I guess in way, it's both.
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Nastaciakaye Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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