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In her room, there is
No such thing as popularity
As homework or grades
Or Ivy League schools.
Boys are just boys
And beauty means nothing.

In her room, there is
Only her.

And she feels like she
Belongs.
©2008-2009 ~Admantina
:iconadmantina:

Author's Comments

A random drabble while I was thinking about one of my characters.
Never really written poetry like this before (never seriously wrote poetry before) so... critique please?

Might as well submit this for #99 Alone, of the 100 themes challenge.

I give :icon100themeschallenge: permission to post this in their gallery.

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:iconaznboardergirl:
interesting... im not sure how to put my comments in words.. maybe i'll figure it out when my brain is fuctioning properly XD

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Optimism can take you anywhere.
:iconchikalita:
I like it. :)
Because I think it is a sort of common human experience, right? Feeling safer and away from pressure in you room. :heart:

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:heart:
:iconchikalita:
PS. I don't think I am the Eva you know?

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:heart:
:iconadmantina:
Thanks. =) I was trying to capture that feeling of peace.
o.o I know an Eva just like you. But AHHH XD maybe not. My bad.

=D But you're still awesome, so I'm keeping you on my dev watch. ^__^

Nice-to-meet-you. :dance:
:iconchikalita:
Haha! Nice to meet you too. ^_^

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:heart:
:iconsakurasorceress:
Very nice
Especially for your first time
This is how when I'm reading

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And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:iconadmantina:
Thank you. :dance: For both the comment and the fav. Maybe I'll try writing some more poetry.
:iconsakurasorceress:
Yay!
:boogie:

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And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:icongivemetears:
It's powerful for a short poem. I like how you end it, very...crisp, maybe? XD I'm terrible at describing things.

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"Bridge Club: ASSEMBLEEEEEE!!!!!"

Mental Ward: We're all here because you're not all there.

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