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Eye from: ~Xpercent
Some brushes from =Sugargrl14

The result of procrastination and boredom, and a desperate need for something Spring like in the dreary winter. Turned out kind of Autumn-like though.

Ah well, this was pretty rushed.. I liked playing with the colours though.

Any helpful comments?

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:iconkatarya:
prettyyyyyyy -drroollsss- lmfao. you kno thats damn helpful ;)
:iconlovelinhdor:
i dont really have anything helpful to say.. but uhh.

i really really like it ^^
u know my eye obsessions =]
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me loves :heart:
i really like the green in the iris. very springy ^^
i think the part that makes it autumn-like is the maple leaves, if it were any other kind, it'd be more spring =P

(ps. i have to fix even more of the mass people drawing project =_= jon-la got a haircut. and his bangs changed directions too. its so *faint* =]
oh yea.. i hav to add darren too XD ur gonna be kicking him. lmao)

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:iconshadowgriffen:
wow lol, how did u make this :D,i wanna one too

ioh the only thing i notic is that, the circle aroound her eye, is not perfect...i mean. the round shape going through her pupil. oh wait nvm i cant explain.

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:iconromanticdaydreamer:
ooh pretty :)
for some reason the top of the eye looks weird to me (eyelid area) but since this was rushed, it's forgivable XD
maybe blend the left graphic more into the actual eye picture, that's all I can think of right now as a helpful comment.
everything else looks good :D
:iconxpercent:
Thanks for using my stock. :)

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:iconadmantina:
Thanks for providing such a beautiful eye for stock. :aww:
:iconrianuwally:
SUPER CRITIQUE (this is visual arts so I will be more brutal than in other critiques xD)
The green of the top eyelids are going onto the eyelashes, it seems okay at first glance and then once we look more carefully it is going on the the eyelashes in various areas.
The Whites of the eyes on the left seems too white, therefore unnatural compared to the right.
In my opinion, the use of green everywhere lessens the emphasis on the green of the iris, the impact of the super green iris is not at it's full potential yet. I suggest making the skin around the eye less green because I can see that it is seeping and fading away slowly around it... suggestion, I can't guarantee that it will be better =s
We all know that it does seem like Autum, mainly because of the choice of the leaf brush, and how it is orange (technically there aren't many orange leaves in spring) use something more of a stereotype of spring, which is mainly flowers (in terms of plants)
Also, there is a random eyelash close to the top left corner where the eyelashes are, oh! I think that the iris will be more emphasized if the eyelashes are darker

Other than that it is good. The green iris and it's reflection is really well done, (should the whole pupil be all black? or is that little part beside the centre on the right be there?)
Anyways, that is as brutal as I can get... Sorry if it offends in anyway, I knew you did a rushed job but am still brutal ish.
Keep up the good work =] Thank you for letting me do a super critique.
My sister says it is pretty, like a faerie, pixie mystical eye xD
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You're very welcome. :)

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:iconadmantina:
you mean that little dot in her pupil? or do you mean the coloured part.

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